Liverty shock batch v4

The sticker boxes, the product shot and the size of what sits on screen were fixed in v3, and v4 adds the close to s02 in the dermatologist's own voice. All three play with sound once they are unmuted.

The sticker boxes. The renderer sized each white box from the ink of its own line and then drew the words from a left-ascender origin, so a line with no descender got a box shorter than the font's own line height and the letters landed low and ran wide. The box is now built from the font's ascent and descent, which is identical for every line, and the words are centred on both axes. All nine boxes in this batch now measure 45 px tall with at least 9 px of clear white on every side of the text.

The product shot. The hand-holding render is out of all three cuts. In its place is the store's own photograph of the bottle, with the background lifted to white, shown as a small inset under the speaker rather than across the whole frame. The dropper moment in s01 uses the store's open-bottle photograph the same way. The label reads at this size.

s01 - the steroid treadmill

on screen	7 overlays, 14% of 109.8 s: the hook box, one condition cut, one small skin picture, the clear-week box, and the product as an inset at the three moments it is named

s02 - four creams a dermatologist will not use

on screen	10 overlays, 15% of 126.3 s: the hook box, the four list-number boxes, two small pictures over the shoulder, one condition cut, and the product inset both when she names the drops and on the closing line

The close is in. She used to stop before the pitch, because her donor transcript stops in the same place. The close is transplanted whole from the s01 donor, which sells the same product, with one swap of "pain" for "flares", and it runs from 110 s to the end in the same voice and the same room:

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The take cost $0.50 on InfiniteTalk and runs 16.5 s, so s02 is now 126.9 s. The join is a jump cut at 110 s, which is how every take in this chassis is joined.

s05 - what is inside your cream

on screen	8 overlays, 15% of 98.8 s: the hook box, the banned-in-Europe box, four demo cuts, one small ointment picture, the product inset at the close

The QA verdicts

Full verdicts: s01, s02, s05. The fatals on s01 and s02 are gone with the new product inset, and these three findings are what is left.

the voice	The brand still comes out as "Liberty" or "every" on all three. The captions carry the right spelling. A different belt voice or a Redub on that one word fixes it.
s05 and the creams	The reviewer grades every competitor tube, jar and pan as a wrong product. In this script the other creams are the subject of the lines, so they stay.
the label	The bottle's own label reads "supports healthy liver function" and the pitch is eczema. That is the real label on the real product, so it is a decision about the product rather than the cut.

25 flagged claims across the batch are still waiting on you for a keep or cut decision. Every one of them is still in the copy, as it should be until you say otherwise.

s03 has the old problem

The s03 cut you passed earlier was built before any of this, with insets half the frame wide held for ten seconds. It should go through the same spec before it runs.