Donor 04 (storie77777), seedance swap, the full 50 seconds

Four takes, no face reference, the product photo as the only reference, each take given the same one-line description of her and its locked lines. Joined at the donor's own sentence boundaries (12.1, 26.2, 41.3 s) with one level pass.

50.4 seconds, 480p. Cost of these four takes: about $3.98.

The three seams, a few frames either side

Left to right: 11.8 and 12.4 s, 26.0 and 26.5 s, 41.0 and 41.6 s, then the product at 16 s. The QA model called 12.0 s and 41.5 s a change of woman; these crops are the measurement behind the question of whether the 12 s seam reads as one woman to you.

face crops either side of each seam and the product at 16 s

What goes to post-production

SecondWhat
16.0The label on the stick is mirrored, the known small-print class; a packshot composite over that shot.
12.2"deodorant" and "Kardashian" as the voice says them; a redub of those words.
35.4A doubled "smell, smell"; a trim.
wholeCaptions and the social sticker, as on scripts 2 and 6.

Transcript of the join

0.0-8.5 If your man can't do this to your armpits, you need to get a new deodorant. And this is coming from a girl who armpits used to look like this, and now look like this.
8.7-12.0 That aluminum deodorant, yeah, it's causing the darkness.
12.2-29.2 This is my transformation with kojic acid and turmeric, and they put it in a freaking lightning deodorant. This is Kylie Karnasch's favorite skincare brand. When I say this is my husband's favorite smell, I'm not kidding. Tastes like pineapple, pistachio, vanilla. It smells like the richest girl you've ever met.
29.2-35.4 a girl who works out and goes to the gym. This only lasts for 24 hours on even after working out
35.4-38.5 My husband will gladly smell, smell my armpit.
38.6-50.3 smell amazing. It's lightning my underarm and it lasts for 24 hours. So I would freaking run. And because this is like a summary type of product, they have like a summer. So going on. So if you want to try it now is the time.

QA verdict



# QA — 04-full (stage: join)

3 fatal, 1 major, 0 minor, 0 cosmetic (cosmetic = a viewer cannot see it at full speed)

| At | Kind | Severity | Notice | What |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 12.0s | identity | fatal | 3 | Hard cut at this timestamp replaces the main woman presenter with an entirely different person: facial structure, hair curl pattern, and tank top inner strap design all changed, this was meant to be the same continuous person on camera |
| 16.0s | wrong-product | fatal | 3 | The deodorant bottle held as the focus of this hero product shot has 100% of its label text fully reversed (mirrored): all branding including 'Bright Days' appears backwards and cannot be read correctly |
| 41.5s | identity | fatal | 3 | Hard cut here reverts the presenter back to the original woman from the start of the video, after the presenter had already changed to a different woman at the 12 second cut, breaking consistent presenter identity |
| 0.9s | speech | major | ? | brand said as "do" instead of "Doe" |

## What the video says

If your man can't do this to your armpits, you need to get a new deodorant.  And this is coming from a girl who armpits used to look like this and now look like this.  That aluminum deodorant, yeah, it's causing the darkness.  This is my transformation with kojic acid and turmeric, and they put it in a freaking lightning deodorant.  This is Kylie Karnaschi's favorite skincare brand. When I say this is my husband's favorite smell, I'm not kidding.  Tastes like pineapple, pistachio, vanilla. It smells like the richest girl you've ever met.  a girl who works out and goes to the gym. This only lasts for 24 hours, even after working out,  My husband will gladly smell, smell my armpit.  smell amazing. It's lightening my underarm and it lasts for 24 hours. So I would freaking run.  And because this is like a summary type of product,  they have like a summer. So going on. So if you want to try it now is the time.

## The reviewer, in full

```
[
  {
    "t": 12.0,
    "kind": "identity",
    "notice": 3,
    "severity": "fatal",
    "at_a_cut": true,
    "what": "Hard cut at this timestamp replaces the main woman presenter with an entirely different person: facial structure, hair curl pattern, and tank top inner strap design all changed, this was meant to be the same continuous person on camera"
  },
  {
    "t": 16.0,
    "kind": "wrong-product",
    "notice": 3,
    "severity": "fatal",
    "what": "The deodorant bottle held as the focus of this hero product shot has 100% of its label text fully reversed (mirrored): all branding including 'Bright Days' appears backwards and cannot be read correctly"
  },
  {
    "t": 41.5,
    "kind": "identity",
    "notice": 3,
    "severity": "fatal",
    "at_a_cut": true,
    "what": "Hard cut here reverts the presenter back to the original woman from the start of the video, after the presenter had already changed to a different woman at the 12 second cut, breaking consistent presenter identity"
  }
]
```