8 TikTok Shop winners you kept, each donor line next to our Doe version. Grey = original creator's words, verbatim. Green = we changed something (brand noun or a mis-hearing fix). Yellow = a line kept but flagged because it is literally false for Doe (turmeric, vitamin C, Korea, celebrity, before/after, the TikTok offer). Nothing was removed; you own the line. Click a card to watch the original.
| Original (donor, verbatim) | Ours (Doe) | |
|---|---|---|
| 0.9s | Are you wearing perfume? | Are you wearing perfume? |
| 2.2s | Yes, vanilla. | Yes, vanilla. |
| 3.5s | Smells nice. | Smells nice. |
| 4.4s | We sell it there if you want. | We sell it there if you want. |
| 7.1s | Are you wearing perfume? | Are you wearing perfume? |
| 8.6s | No. | No. |
| 9.2s | Oh, something smells like vanilla and pistachios. | Oh, something smells like vanilla and pistachios. ⚑ Our scent is Vanilla & Bergamot, not pistachio. KEPT verbatim; swap to bergamot on your word (note: Seedance mispronounces "bergamot"). |
| 12.9s | Ah, yes. | Ah, yes. |
| 13.8s | You're smelling my armpits. | You're smelling my armpits. |
| 15.3s | Pardon me? | Pardon me? |
| 16.3s | My deodorant! | My deodorant! |
| 17.3s | Wanna smell? | Wanna smell? |
| 18.1s | No thanks, I have deodorant. | No thanks, I have deodorant. |
| 20.1s | But does your deodorant have kojic acid that helps lighten dark underarms? | But does your deodorant have kojic acid that helps lighten dark underarms? |
| 24.3s | No. | No. |
| 25.7s | Does yours contain turmeric that help calm inflammation from shaving? | Does yours contain turmeric that help calm inflammation from shaving? ⚑ Doe INCI has no turmeric (it has niacinamide, kojic acid, phenylethyl resorcinol). KEPT per your call. |
| 29.8s | Um, no. | Um, no. |
| 31.5s | Does yours have vitamin C and niacinamide to help your underarms look brighter and smoother without no white cast? | Does yours have vitamin C and niacinamide to help your underarms look brighter and smoother without no white cast? ⚑ Doe INCI has no vitamin C. KEPT per your call. |
| 37.9s | No! | No! |
| 39.3s | Well, this one does. | Well, this one does. |
| 40.8s | I'll take it. | I'll take it. |
| 42.3s | Stop. | Stop. |
| 42.8s | Don't buy from me. | Don't buy from me. |
| 44.0s | Buy from Tapping this Orange Cart. | Buy from Tapping this Orange Cart. ⚑ TikTok Shop mechanic; our ad runs on Meta to the product page. KEPT. |
| 45.9s | Why? | Why? |
| 47.0s | Because you're going to use a lot of this anyways, you get a better deal if you get two. | Because you're going to use a lot of this anyways, you get a better deal if you get two. |
| 50.2s | And a free travel size for quantities last, so hurry up. | And a free travel size for quantities last, so hurry up. ⚑ Our live offer is Buy 1 Get 1 Free $39.95 — no travel-size gift. KEPT; swap to BOGO on your word. |
| 53.8s | Thanks. | Thanks. |
| Original (donor, verbatim) | Ours (Doe) | |
|---|---|---|
| 0.0s | Let me know why it took the girls 30 freaking years. | Let me know why it took the girls 30 freaking years. |
| 2.5s | to figure out how to lighten dark armpits without paying $2 ,000 for a procedure. | to figure out how to lighten dark armpits without paying $2 ,000 for a procedure. ⚑ Price-anchor vs laser; fine for us too. KEPT. |
| 6.6s | There you go, I was scrubbing at my armpits to try and get rid of that stain. | There you go, I was scrubbing at my armpits to try and get rid of that stain. |
| 10.0s | That's not gonna do anything. | That's not gonna do anything. |
| 11.5s | If you're using harsh exfoliant daily, you're not gonna fade your dark armpits. | If you're using harsh exfoliant daily, you're not gonna fade your dark armpits. |
| 14.7s | So the fact that they finally stuck kojic acid and turmeric in a deodorant by the same celebrity brand that's always sold out on here so no wonder it sold out three days after long. | So the fact that they finally stuck kojic acid and turmeric in a deodorant by the same celebrity brand that's always sold out on here so no wonder it sold out three days after long. ⚑ Doe INCI has no turmeric (it has niacinamide, kojic acid, phenylethyl resorcinol). KEPT per your call. |
| 23.2s | After seeing the reviews of how good it lightened, I was expecting it to smell like shit. | After seeing the reviews of how good it lightened, I was expecting it to smell like shit. |
| 27.2s | But if you are a vanilla girl, this really smells like... | But if you are a vanilla girl, this really smells like... |
| 29.7s | the most luxurious caribbean like bora bora rich bitch. | the most luxurious caribbean like bora bora rich bitch. |
| 34.1s | because of that though literally all of tiktok decided to sell this out they just restocked them and this might be our last chance to grab one for the summer because they're giving away these little mini deodorants when you get two so they're literally flying off the freaking shelves like crazy. | because of that though literally all of tiktok decided to sell this out they just restocked them and this might be our last chance to grab one for the summer because they're giving away these little mini deodorants when you get two so they're literally flying off the freaking shelves like crazy. ⚑ Our offer is Buy 1 Get 1 Free $39.95 — no mini gift. KEPT. |
| 47.8s | Look how freaking cute it is! | Look how freaking cute it is! |
| 50.2s | So running the promo, this is your sign to run. | So running the promo, this is your sign to run. |
| Original (donor, verbatim) | Ours (Doe) | |
|---|---|---|
| 0.1s | This is the best thing to help with the dark underarms. | This is the best thing to help with the dark underarms. |
| 4.0s | And I know because I've been a pharmacist for over 17 years and I know what I'm talking about. | And I know because I've been a pharmacist for over 17 years and I know what I'm talking about. ⚑ Our on-screen presenter is AI and holds no such credential. KEPT — you own the line. |
| 8.5s | Really, there's two ingredients that can help. | Really, there's two ingredients that can help. |
| 10.5s | The first one is kojic acid. | The first one is kojic acid. |
| 13.1s | Kojic acid is a natural skin brightening agent derived from fungus that helps with the dark spots by inhibiting the enzyme tyrosinase which is essentially responsible for melanin. | Kojic acid is a natural skin brightening agent derived from fungus that helps with the dark spots by inhibiting the enzyme tyrosinase which is essentially responsible for melanin. |
| 23.5s | And the next ingredient is turmeric. | And the next ingredient is turmeric. ⚑ Doe INCI has no turmeric (it has niacinamide, kojic acid, phenylethyl resorcinol). KEPT per your call. |
| 25.3s | but more specifically the antioxidant rich compound curcumin. | but more specifically the antioxidant rich compound curcumin. |
| 29.2s | Curcumin helps even out skin tone by reducing excess melanin production, and also due to its anti -inflammatory properties. | Curcumin helps even out skin tone by reducing excess melanin production, and also due to its anti -inflammatory properties. |
| 36.6s | And pairing both these ingredients together can have a synergist effect, to help with that dark spot. | And pairing both these ingredients together can have a synergist effect, to help with that dark spot. |
| 41.8s | And typically you'll find creams or lotions with this in it. | And typically you'll find creams or lotions with this in it. |
| 44.8s | The amazing brand MediCube actually put it into a deodorant. | The amazing brand Doe actually put it into a deodorant. |
| 48.1s | It's an aluminum -free deodorant with the kojic acid and that turmeric. | It's an aluminum -free deodorant with the kojic acid and that turmeric. ⚑ Doe INCI has no turmeric (it has niacinamide, kojic acid, phenylethyl resorcinol). KEPT per your call. |
| 52.5s | Formulated in Korea, it's giving me tropical five -star hotel in Maui vibes. | Formulated in Korea, it's giving me tropical five -star hotel in Maui vibes. ⚑ Doe is not Korean-formulated as far as we know. KEPT. |
| 58.0s | So not only are you helping those dark armpits, you're doing it while smelling super amazing as well. | So not only are you helping those dark armpits, you're doing it while smelling super amazing as well. |
| 63.6s | They just launched this here on TikTok shop, and they've actually stocked out over five times, but... | They just launched this here on TikTok shop, and they've actually stocked out over five times, but... ⚑ TikTok Shop mechanic; our ad runs on Meta. KEPT. |
| 69.2s | If you're lucky enough to see the link below. | If you're lucky enough to see the link below. |
| 71.5s | Sorry, guys. | Sorry, guys. |
| 72.9s | This just smells so good. | This just smells so good. |
| 74.4s | You got to grab it before they sell out. | You got to grab it before they sell out. |
| Original (donor, verbatim) | Ours (Doe) | |
|---|---|---|
| 0.0s | If your man can't do this to your armpits, you need to get a new deodorant. | If your man can't do this to your armpits, you need to get a new deodorant. |
| 4.2s | And this is coming from a girl who armpits used to look like this and now look like this. | And this is coming from a girl who armpits used to look like this and now look like this. ⚑ Real before/after of underarms. Doe has no real before/after and the brief bans faked ones — the remake needs a generated or sourced before/after. KEPT in script, your call on the visual. |
| 8.5s | That aluminum deodorant, yeah, it's causing the darkness. | That aluminum deodorant, yeah, it's causing the darkness. ⚑ Brief P16: aluminum has no direct pigmenting action. KEPT. |
| 11.2s | This is my transformation with kojic acid and turmeric. | This is my transformation with kojic acid and turmeric. ⚑ Doe INCI has no turmeric (it has niacinamide, kojic acid, phenylethyl resorcinol). KEPT per your call. |
| 13.8s | And they put it in a freaking lightning deodorant. | And they put it in a freaking lightning deodorant. |
| 16.4s | This is Kylie Kardashian's favorite skincare brand. | This is Kylie Kardashian's favorite skincare brand. ⚑ Doe is not a celebrity-owned brand. KEPT. |
| 18.6s | When I say this is my husband's favorite smell, I'm not kidding. | When I say this is my husband's favorite smell, I'm not kidding. |
| 21.8s | Tastes like pineapple, pistachio, vanilla. | Tastes like pineapple, pistachio, vanilla. ⚑ Our scent is Vanilla & Bergamot, not pistachio. KEPT verbatim; swap to bergamot on your word (note: Seedance mispronounces "bergamot"). |
| 24.8s | It smells like the richest girl you've ever met. | It smells like the richest girl you've ever met. |
| 30.0s | a girl who works out and goes to the gym this only lasts for 24 hours on me even after working out my husband will gladly smell my armpit smell amazing it's lightening my underarm and it lasts for 24 hours so i would freaking run and because this is like a summery type of product they have like a summer so going on so if you want to try it now is the time | a girl who works out and goes to the gym this only lasts for 24 hours on me even after working out my husband will gladly smell my armpit smell amazing it's lightening my underarm and it lasts for 24 hours so i would freaking run and because this is like a summery type of product they have like a summer so going on so if you want to try it now is the time |
| Original (donor, verbatim) | Ours (Doe) | |
|---|---|---|
| 0.0s | You're actually scaring me now. | You're actually scaring me now. |
| 3.1s | I'm being dressed. | I'm being dressed. |
| 4.1s | Are you seriously putting makeup under your arms? | Are you seriously putting makeup under your arms? |
| 10.7s | Let me see what it looks like. | Let me see what it looks like. |
| 14.6s | Girl, it's not even that dark. | Girl, it's not even that dark. |
| 17.5s | If you really want to lighten it up, I'd rather you... | If you really want to lighten it up, I'd rather you... |
| 21.1s | go to laser treatment or something, then you put makeup on, but... | go to laser treatment or something, then you put makeup on, but... |
| 26.3s | I've been using this stuff so we don't need to spend thousands. | I've been using this stuff so we don't need to spend thousands. |
| 29.9s | This is... | This is... |
| 32.0s | My line of deodorant from Medicare. | My line of deodorant from Doe. |
| 34.4s | It literally smells like vanilla, so if you don't like vanilla, I wouldn't even use this. | It literally smells like vanilla, so if you don't like vanilla, I wouldn't even use this. |
| 39.0s | Oh my gosh. | Oh my gosh. |
| 40.3s | And it'll last all freaking day, girl. | And it'll last all freaking day, girl. |
| 43.4s | This would be my armpits. | This would be my armpits. |
| 45.5s | transform and like three for you weeks. | transform and like three for you weeks. ⚑ Before/after over ~3 weeks. Same visual note. KEPT. |
| 49.1s | Didn't even take that long. | Didn't even take that long. |
| 50.1s | I just, like, swiped it every day. | I just, like, swiped it every day. |
| 52.2s | You only need to do it three to four times a day. | You only need to do it three to four times a day. |
| 54.2s | If you're, like, very sweaty, it'll hold that, so you don't need to apply it a lot. | If you're, like, very sweaty, it'll hold that, so you don't need to apply it a lot. |
| 59.2s | But here, I'm trying to like roll it out. | But here, I'm trying to like roll it out. |
| 62.4s | I just put this on it. | I just put this on it. |
| 64.4s | Medicare. | Doe. |
| 66.1s | a celebrity brand. | a celebrity brand. ⚑ Doe is not a celebrity brand. KEPT. |
| 68.0s | They made it with cold, gigantic, and turmeric, and that's why my armpits are so lightened. | They made it with kojic acid and turmeric, and that's why my armpits are so lightened. ⚑ Doe INCI has no turmeric (it has niacinamide, kojic acid, phenylethyl resorcinol). KEPT per your call. |
| 72.5s | But seriously? | But seriously? |
| 76.0s | I'm really going to send this video to you so you can watch the transformation. | I'm really going to send this video to you so you can watch the transformation. ⚑ Before/after transformation beat. Same visual note. KEPT. |
| 82.3s | And I'm going to send a link to you because they already settled over like 50k. | And I'm going to send a link to you because they already settled over like 50k. ⚑ Sales-volume claim from Medicube. KEPT. |
| 85.9s | It's so good. | It's so good. |
| 87.0s | Here, I can give you a seat. | Here, I can give you a seat. |
| 88.3s | It smells so good. | It smells so good. |
| 89.5s | Mm. | Mm. |
| 92.0s | Girl, stop putting makeup on your own face. | Girl, stop putting makeup on your own face. |
| 94.7s | I'm going to send you the link. | I'm going to send you the link. |
| 95.8s | They're already having a somersault on it. | They're already having a somersault on it. |
| 97.9s | so you can get your own. | so you can get your own. |
| Original (donor, verbatim) | Ours (Doe) | |
|---|---|---|
| 0.0s | My white friend said that my armpits are whiter than her ass crack, which is pretty insane considering I was working with that. | My white friend said that my armpits are whiter than her ass crack, which is pretty insane considering I was working with that. |
| 5.5s | But once I figured out that my deodorant was actually the cause of my freaking dark spots, that's when they actually started to get this white. | But once I figured out that my deodorant was actually the cause of my freaking dark spots, that's when they actually started to get this white. |
| 12.3s | And the one that has literally done it for me is the one by Metacube. | And the one that has literally done it for me is the one by Doe. |
| 14.9s | It has kojic acid and turmeric in it to help brighten up and even out the skin tone. | It has kojic acid and turmeric in it to help brighten up and even out the skin tone. ⚑ Doe INCI has no turmeric (it has niacinamide, kojic acid, phenylethyl resorcinol). KEPT per your call. |
| 18.7s | And it also doesn't have any of those bad ingredients in it that's going to give you ingrowns or anything like that. | And it also doesn't have any of those bad ingredients in it that's going to give you ingrowns or anything like that. |
| 22.8s | And usually people buy this for like 30 freaking dollars. | And usually people buy this for like 30 freaking dollars. ⚑ Our price is $39.95 (Buy 1 Get 1 Free). KEPT. |
| 30.0s | almost half that. | almost half that. |
| 31.1s | So if you've been using a bad deodorant and you have no idea why you have dark spots, you got to stop rubbing that shit on there. | So if you've been using a bad deodorant and you have no idea why you have dark spots, you got to stop rubbing that shit on there. |
| Original (donor, verbatim) | Ours (Doe) | |
|---|---|---|
| 0.0s | i have dark underarms | i have dark underarms |
| Original (donor, verbatim) | Ours (Doe) | |
|---|---|---|
| 0.0s | Me while using American deodorant | Me while using American deodorant |
| 5.5s | Me after using Korean deodorant | Me after using Doe deodorant ⚑ Donor card read "Korean deodorant"; swapped the product referent to Doe. KEPT the American-vs-ours contrast. |